turning in an essay should not feel like a guessing game. midnight maps your draft directly to your professor's rubric so you know exactly where you stand.
it evaluates your prompt, rubric, and instructions together. it gives you an accurate score, not a generic percentage.
instead of vague advice, get the exact quote, what went wrong, and a clear next step to rewrite it.
This essay will show how the green light represents the American Dream.
Replace the announcement with the claim itself — argue what the green light reveals, not that you will discuss it.
This shows that Gatsby really wants something.
Name what the light lets Gatsby believe. “Wants something” analyzes nothing — say what the reaching gesture means when the thing he wants is unreachable.
which is ironic.
Ironic how? Spell out the reversal: getting Daisy costs Gatsby the dream that organized his whole life.
Tom Buchanan calls him “Mr. Nobody from Nowhere,” this shows that class still mattered a lot.
Comma splice — split this into two sentences or join them with a colon.
The essay proves the green light matters but never commits to what it means. Every body paragraph would get sharper if it had to defend a specific reading.
This essay will show how the green light represents the American Dream.
Several sentences restate what happens in a scene instead of interpreting it, so the strongest evidence is doing the least work.
This shows that Gatsby really wants something.